Israeli strike on a school in Gaza kills at least 27 people, Palestinian health officials say
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Strike on school
17 people killed
lol ok. Anything not to paint Israel as child murderers, I guess. Careful not to consume the boot.
The bodies of 14 children and five women were recovered from the school in the Tuffah neighborhood of Gaza City
It's literally the first sentence of the second paragraph.
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The bodies of 14 children and five women were recovered from the school in the Tuffah neighborhood of Gaza City
It's literally the first sentence of the second paragraph.
first sentence of the second paragraph.
So, literally, after the lede
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first sentence of the second paragraph.
So, literally, after the lede
What would you have had them call it?
Israeli strike on a school in Gaza kills at least 14 children, 5 women, and (presumably) 8 men, Palestinian health officials say"?
As it happens, children, women, and men are all 'people', and using the collective term makes for a more concise title. It's not like they're sugarcoating what actually happened.
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What would you have had them call it?
Israeli strike on a school in Gaza kills at least 14 children, 5 women, and (presumably) 8 men, Palestinian health officials say"?
As it happens, children, women, and men are all 'people', and using the collective term makes for a more concise title. It's not like they're sugarcoating what actually happened.
You misunderstand. I’m merely pointing out that what you wrote is after the lede
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You misunderstand. I’m merely pointing out that what you wrote is after the lede
That's correct, it is, but that has nothing to do with the post I was replying to, which claimed
Anything not to paint Israel as child murderers, I guess.
Either way, I'd say that the the lede they did use - 'Israeli airstrikes killed at least 100 Palestinians across the Gaza Strip on Thursday[...]' - is just fine.
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The bodies of 14 children and five women were recovered from the school in the Tuffah neighborhood of Gaza City
It's literally the first sentence of the second paragraph.
Sure, but look at the title. You don't call, after blowing up a school, child casualties "people." That's what we call trying to soften the blow.
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Strike on school
17 people killed
lol ok. Anything not to paint Israel as child murderers, I guess. Careful not to consume the boot.
Given the track record of western reporting denying genocide and doing everything they can to whitewash Israel I get your response, but how would you have titled it?
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Given the track record of western reporting denying genocide and doing everything they can to whitewash Israel I get your response, but how would you have titled it?
Our Ukrainian editors seem to get the memo:
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Our Ukrainian editors seem to get the memo:
Yeah, you're right. The "Palastinian health authorities say" could have been dropped instead.
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Given the track record of western reporting denying genocide and doing everything they can to whitewash Israel I get your response, but how would you have titled it?
I mean, I don't work for the AP. But if you absolutely must have a sensationalized title, I probably would go with "Harrowing Toll in Gaza Strike--Majority of Victims Reported to Be Children."
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